Friday, 3 July 2020

Oceania dangers

Chapter 1
 In the deepest deeps if the oceans lurks dark creature made off darkness and chaos they consume other dark mystic creatures in shallower waters in a kingdom made of opal towers and overgrown coral encrusted diamonds with a lot of riches in store having no security plan may not be ideal being in such a dangerous land that's why the leaders with higher occupations but for poor angelica she did not have the job of her dreams but she had the job that other people would only dream of having being a princess one night her and her friends decided to hang out “then she spilled chess on the dress AH!” yelled _______. “Really that's so scary” sarcastically said Anonymous well the girls bickered in the room well angelica sprinted through the hallway and out through the glass pane her she spins around more than her tail broke into two and started to grow feet her scales disappeared she lie down on the floor and shut her eyes as if she was in a deep sleep “wheres angelica” said ______ she shrugged her shoulders they started for a second till ______ ran to a button on the wall she threw herself onto the button till a loud noise started to go they busted into the room and started to throw things everywhere.”Where is she” said the king “we don’t know she said she was going to the bathroom.” said ________ they scurried outside to see a human on the floor “a human!” said ______ she picked her up and swam to the top of the water the moon light shined on her and the human a dolphin came and took the human on her back then swam to shore and putting her on sand the they left a smirk was on the humans face she sat up opened her eyes and started to transform she looked exactly like angelica

1 comment:

  1. good! but what was the empty spaces for is it a person?

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