Hi Diya, I can see you have been working really hard. It was a great idea to do your work in a doc or drawing and create a link. You might just have to learn about how to change the permissions if you want others to view the work, or otherwise copy the work in the slide deck. Mr Cossey
Kia ora Diya! I love your chocolate chip poem, rotten cookies sound terrible. That is a great fact about chocolate chips, I did not know that! Next time you could delete the slides that you haven't used to make your slides flow a bit better.
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Hi Diya,
ReplyDeleteI can see you have been working really hard.
It was a great idea to do your work in a doc or drawing and create a link. You might just have to learn about how to change the permissions if you want others to view the work, or otherwise copy the work in the slide deck.
Mr Cossey
Hi Mr Cossey
Deletei know how the premissons work i think its just the intenet at my house sorry again i will try and fix thanks for letting me know
Diya =)
Kia ora Diya!
ReplyDeleteI love your chocolate chip poem, rotten cookies sound terrible. That is a great fact about chocolate chips, I did not know that! Next time you could delete the slides that you haven't used to make your slides flow a bit better.
Miss G :)
Thanks for the feedback Miss G will do next time thank you!
Delete- Diya =)